The revision which offers improvement in word choice is; The chemical waste produced by factories is dangerous, and factory owners should be held accountable.
Sentence Revisions
It follows from the sentence from the argumentative essay that; The chemical waste produced by factories is out of hand, and factory owners should get in trouble.
On this note, a better choice of words which best conveys the same meaning as intended in the sentence above is; replacing "out of hand" and "get in trouble" with "dangerous" and "accountable" respectively.
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