Assignment: 02.10 An Excellent Ending FOR AUTOMOBILES
My Ending Paragraph: Finally, people wondered what the price was on these automobiles. Some worried because they couldn’t buy it. Back then, prices for these automobiles were cheap. Today, the world's highest price of a car is 48.4 million dollars. So, from 1885-2021, the prices on these things have sky-rocketed.
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Introduction/Body Paragraphs 5-3____ I included my entire introduction and body paragraphs from Lesson 02.08. 2-0_0___ I included part of my introduction and body paragraphs from Lesson 02.08
Use of a Transition 5-3____I clearly used a transition to introduce my conclusion. 2-0__0__ I partially used a transition to introduce my conclusion.
Rephrasing of the Thesis 10-6____ I clearly rephrased the ideas in my thesis without repeating it word for word. 5-0__0__ I partially rephrased the ideas in my thesis without repeating it word for word.
Language 10-6____ I clearly used mature and objective language in my conclusion. 5-0_0___ I partially used mature and objective language in my conclusion.
Inclusion of a Clincher 10-6____I clearly included a clincher to provide a memorable statement in my conclusion. 5-0__0__I partially included a clincher to provide a memorable statement in my conclusion.
Format 5-3____ I clearly wrote a well-developed paragraph of four or more sentences. 2-0_0___ I partially wrote a well-developed paragraph of fewer than four sentences.
Clarity in Writing 5-3____ I clearly used formal language.____ I clearly wrote in the third person point of view.____ I clearly used correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling. 2-0____ I partially used formal language.____ I partially wrote in the third person point of view.__2__ I partially used correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling.