Today was like any other day my classmates ignoring me like some insect my teacher was annoying like usual a typical day for me little did I know it will be the worst day of my life my homework teacher walked in as usual but I sense that he was a little different he had a frightened look on his face and was shivering he yelled 'help me!' and stab himself in the neck you can see everyone's shock look some were vomiting and the rest was screaming one students yell the 'curse of mangrove'all I knew i had to get out of that classroom no matter what I picked up my things and left in a hurry not looking back I went to hide in the Janitor's Closet herring a squealing sound I looked up and saw a pale skin ,red eye, black hair figure hanging from the ceiling.
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