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Read the following sentence.

Paul Revere was the man who everybody knew because he rode a horse through the night to tell others that the British were coming.

Read the revised sentence: Paul Revere was remembered for his heroic ride through the dark, dangerous night to warn colonists of the approaching British.

Why did the writer revise the sentence in this way?

To punctuate correctly and make it longer
To use more specific words and add details
To include a transition word and connect ideas
To reorganize ideas in a more logical order