Answer: The rewritten version of the article is written below. This is in my own words.
Explanation: At 10:41 in the morning, two police detectives located two men that had entered a liquor mart in the Oak Hill Shopping Center at 1300 block of Oak Hill Avenue. The men looked and acted unusually as they entered the shopping center. When the detectives arrived at the mart to investigate the suspicious men, they noticed that while the other was robbing the clerk blind, one of the men was pointing a gun at the innocent clerk. The officers put a stop to the robbery by shooting the man with a gun. However, this wasn't the shopping center's first rodeo, as there have been seven other robberies taking place in the past month in the shopping center.
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